literature

Eulogy

Deviation Actions

darkcrescendo's avatar
Published:
1.1K Views

Literature Text

A dereliction of hair vines your face,
and I recall the way ivy hugged the muddy bricks
when we allowed the days to oversee our construction.

I caress the cracked barrens of your cheek;
the epitaph of your smile is scratched in paddocks,
a dusty home for grass-seed dreams left fallow.
We invited rain, but only Autumn attended us.

The parched expanse of your skin invites water,
and I remember the river, clogged with salt;
the soft moans of the withered eucalypts,
and the one tussock of grass by rusted pumps.
Bushfires were a mercy for them.

Your casket moves beyond my reach,
and I hear the creak from when we closed crack-timber gates
and we coaxed the ute out of its charred depression
and we took the few boxes we had saved
and we moved to a caravan on the coast
and we talked of water and weather and we floated...
until now, with only the soft sound
of waves in the distance, and a priest in my ear,

I watch as the fires finally claim my home.
Something for which I probably stayed up far too late. I'll take a look at it in a few days time to evaluate the need for revision.

As always, feedback is appreciated.

Benedictions.

Minor editing done. It is amazing the little things you miss when you're fatigued.
© 2007 - 2024 darkcrescendo
Comments12
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
EchoeNyx's avatar
I believe, that amongst all of these wise and experienced critics my thoughts shall go unheard of but, alas...the more I try, and as time transcends time, I too shall grow as wise as them but, on to this. Ahem. Beautifuly written. I am sad to hear that you won;'t be on the DA but, this poem just as the rest...the imagery...wonderful. Crystalline.