You may look now,
out frost-washed windows
as lights form your name
and I unwrap the presents
of your smile.
©2006-2009 `darkcrescendo
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Comments: 18
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Written for the `ArtistsForCharity Winter Contest [link]
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Writers: Your entry is a poem that will be added to a mug with `ArtistsForCharity colours and theme.
It must be a short poem of no more than 5 lines.
Make your poem stand out; we are not looking for a Hallmark card. No need to spend time on an artistic presentation of the poem - it will be judged on the writing alone.
Entries close November 1.
The title is simply 'Surprise' - the contest requires us to have 'lit' placed after literature entries.
One day, I will learn the art of granting poems quality titles. Until then, I am well aware my titles are bland, I'm working on it, so you can all bite me
Benedictions all!
Salient details:
Writers: Your entry is a poem that will be added to a mug with `ArtistsForCharity colours and theme.
It must be a short poem of no more than 5 lines.
Make your poem stand out; we are not looking for a Hallmark card. No need to spend time on an artistic presentation of the poem - it will be judged on the writing alone.
Entries close November 1.
The title is simply 'Surprise' - the contest requires us to have 'lit' placed after literature entries.
One day, I will learn the art of granting poems quality titles. Until then, I am well aware my titles are bland, I'm working on it, so you can all bite me
Benedictions all!
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Trying to learn freeverse. I'm working right now on tiny poems - i.e., concise but deep. Then I might move up.
But I'm no Christmas-writer... So I'll have to survive without the contest.
Cheers,
J
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"In vain doth valour breed" - Milton
--
You don't know me.
So don't act like you do.
Don't ask me either,
'Cause I too don't have a clue.
... Evelyn ...
the comma might work better for me if you reverted the first line back to someone speaking it.
and i'm not liking "lights form your name". i dunno what it is about it, but for me it just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem.
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Carpe Noctem
*EldritchCabal - Go, be inspired, and get to work!
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Carpe Noctem
*EldritchCabal - Go, be inspired, and get to work!
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But I -being poor- have only my dreams --Yeats
:~)
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<salshep> <ordie>I should wite something awsome
<salshep> It's true
<ordie> You're write. That's my one-size-fits-all reort.
#Cabal. Because someone needs to be.
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