literature

The Day's Noose

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Literature Text

Read blood swells, in fear-wrought fonts
page-bound by ink; wells up in thoughts
caught in small words and minds for war
all fought in scripts of 'done before'.

Red blood wells, and fear-sought peace
is drenched in oil; swells up like gas
in days-old dead and brand new cars
both fuelled by 'black gold' greed.

It's all old news, in brand new print
and bound with lies; sold back 'at cost'
for the read, and the dead, and the red text -
all that makes that first cup of 'wake up' so good.
Another forum-inspired poem - [link]

The task:
The assignment is to write a story or poem, but you may only use words that contain one syllable.

Another one in freeverse.
Some experimentation with varying the rhythmic style in-stanza.

Benedictions!

EDIT: Damn it - I just noticed 'before' in stanza 1. so much for only using monosyllables
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0o-elly-o0's avatar
I'm a fan of simplicity where it works.. and this is, Amazing. I really love this.